sleeps with butterflies ([info]frkeske) wrote,
@ 2007-03-11 12:58:00
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"hover" (08/03-07)
you make me think of poetry;
moments of lingering before finally
giving in
everlasting rewrite may
pull a rank on my body

gauntlets
knit a fine line
here you have
paths
in the palm
of my hand
and so it is

you know me from the wrist
to the palm of your hand
do you ever admit
to get lost in the maze

do you ever
hold evidences
just like i
held
them?



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[info]ninjafeline
2007-09-04 11:35 am UTC (link)
Hi, I just saw your profile come up listing under byen and mew, and a few other bands I really like, and your journal looks really interesting, so hope it's ok I friended you :)
this piece is really good, i like the way your words flow.

(I've just moved to Denmark and am learning Danish and Swedish, so forgive me for not attempting to write in Norwegian, but I can understand a little of what you write.)

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[info]frkeske
2007-09-05 11:56 am UTC (link)
Hi there, I was pleasantly surprised by your comment.
thanks for friending me, it surely is ok, and I'll add you back :)


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